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Mlp NG: Just like my mama

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Here is sweet style, she wants to be like her mother. A fashion designer




Sweet style belong to me

Base: MLP BASE .:Sewing Pone:. by RoseyInk-Bases 

Sketch made in sketchbook app

Colored in procreate app
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2400x1800px 872.79 KB
Make
iOS v9.2.1
Model
iPad2,5
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

To start off, I have to say that the technique in this drawing is pretty impressive. I kind of like the shadows that the mare and the machine cast onto the wall. It feels like she's working in an actual room. I also like how you were able to work with the base and draw your own features onto the body to make the character feel more realistic, those being the mane, tail, and glasses. Now I have two big suggestions for you. Number one, the mare is given far too much head room. In film class, we learned that unless there's something happening above a person's head, they should never be given too much head room. Rather, the frame should be just above their head, much like the original base of this drawing. Number two, if the mare is thinking about her mother while sewing this fabric, perhaps there should be something like a framed picture standing right beside the machine or hanging on the wall, to serve as a reminder of why she works so hard. The bonus to that is that she'll actually be given something to look at, instead of just staring at a blank wall. So those are my two big suggestions for this drawing. Everything else looks pretty good. Keep up the good work, my friend!